Saturday, 31 December 2011

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You should thank Yanessa for her comment about the Eq. You borught it back to power to help wrap it up. Well done Daniel. You have creatively shown M's development and transformation throughout the play. You have brought in some good examples from the play to show his integrity and his change from it. I like how you referred to Neptune's seas. You have definitely demonstrated his evolution as a character. Good work.

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